tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5686431431756062986.post448692572220160835..comments2023-06-01T11:52:50.149-04:00Comments on The Happy Amateur: 'Lonely'Sasha A. Palmerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5686431431756062986.post-72629687327403396032012-05-02T15:50:05.315-04:002012-05-02T15:50:05.315-04:00Oh, what a romantic comment!
Thank you, Jules!Oh, what a romantic comment!<br />Thank you, Jules!Sasha A. Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5686431431756062986.post-75688046900536508282012-05-02T15:33:22.968-04:002012-05-02T15:33:22.968-04:00My nights seem stretched and longer when my love i...My nights seem stretched and longer when my love is away. For then I have to live with the shadows left by nightmares ...alone, but perhaps not so lonely knowing he will return... sometimes whispers are very haunting. Nice verse - thanks for sharing.Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5686431431756062986.post-83127558505826975612012-05-02T09:42:14.287-04:002012-05-02T09:42:14.287-04:00Thank you, Barbara!
As for the "Ingales"...Thank you, Barbara!<br />As for the "Ingales" and "Ing," I actually tried to emphasize "night" and "long" that were supposed to be at the end of the lines, so this 'funny' formatting was done for the sake of the form and syllable count :-) but I kind of enjoyed splitting the words that way and I really enjoy your explanation!Sasha A. Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5686431431756062986.post-6642537907888655542012-05-02T09:36:08.359-04:002012-05-02T09:36:08.359-04:00Didn't try the form when it showed up, but now...Didn't try the form when it showed up, but now I see its possibilities. I like the way your poem sounds. <br />I don't quite understand your choice to emphasize "Ingales" and "Ing" with formatting. Is it to stress the subject's feeling incomplete?Barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/may-and-a-return-to-normal-for-wwp-a-lonely-poem/noreply@blogger.com