Saturday, April 21, 2012

"Still" (haiku)


The fire died out, but
Beneath its remnants, deep down,
There still lies a spark.



Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur

http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/2012/04/april-heights-day-22-134-still.html

8 comments:

  1. Hmmm -- this could be taken two ways ... either a real fire or the fire of love!!! Either way ... nice!!
    Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows

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    1. I'm glad it worked that way: that was my plan :-)!

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  2. The spark lying there is just waiting for a breath to bring it to life!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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  3. I originally had "the breath of the wind" in my next haiku, following this one. Then I changed it, and now I'm going back to it. Thank you very much for the comment!

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