Tuesday, June 5, 2012

"Triad" (a copy-change poem, cinquain)


A writing prompt from Margo Roby (http://margoroby.wordpress.com/2012/06/05/a-summerful-of-tuesday-tryouts/#comment-5975)
The form is cinquain.  You'll find its description here: 
http://margoroby.wordpress.com/2011/05/24/tuesday-tryouts-poems-the-cinquain-form/




~ Triad ~

These be
Three summer things:
The fireflies’ dance…the long
Warm evenings melting into nights…
My love.



Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur 


Image credit:
http://www.firefly.org/firefly-pictures.html#synh1



6 comments:

  1. Ahhh! Lovely, Sasha. It works a treat, doesn't it? I do like the triad cinquain form.

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    1. Thank you, Margo! I did enjoy this form.

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  2. Wonderfully crafted, Sasha. I enjoyed this one a lot.

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  3. Very nice - I love the images melting into "my love"

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    1. :-) I cannot stop smiling..thank you, Annette!

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