Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Cool It



A writing prompt from Poets United -

Write poetry or prose using the following four words: Surge/Recede & Trivial/Significant



How
Easily we
Get blinded by
The surge of emotions,
Only when anger recedes,
Can we separate
Significant from
Trivial.



Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur

12 comments:

  1. I like the flow of this shaped piece ... nice to see an example of "Vice Versa"!

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  2. Thank you, it's fun playing with shapes sometimes.

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  3. How very true, love how you used the words required. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  4. Nice work, loved where you took the prompt!

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  5. Thank you, Tally, and Happy 1st Birthday to your blog!

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  6. Excellent and concise! I like it.

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  7. simple and to the point.. well done

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  8. Succinct and dead on. Excellent write!

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