Saturday, March 2, 2013

A little prayer (triptych poem)


An attempt at a “triptych poem ”
(may be read from left to right and from top to bottom.)

Faith               Hope                Love
Pray                For                   You
Find                Happiness        Always


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Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur

24 comments:

  1. find happiness always...
    with faith hope & love
    its a bit easier.

    smiles.

    never tried one of these.
    might need to.

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  2. Great message in compact form :-)

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  3. Somehow, in my attempts to study poetry, I haven't come across this form before. (Or perhaps I did, and then forgot -_- *hangs head*) Thanks for the introduction! I'll have to give it a go, seems like there's lots of room for creative play. I liked your take on the form; very uplifting, kudos :D

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    1. Fred mentioned triptych poems and I looked them up :-)
      It's a fun form to try.
      Thank you for visiting!

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  4. ...never heard of a triptych poem but def like the effect & versatility... smiles...

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  5. nice, and the way you put this together here, you actually have six triptych's, very cool how that worked out. Thanks for putting this together for us. Definitely enjoyed.

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  6. nice..love how this can be read in different ways.. hope for happiness and loving the other...nice..

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  7. I love this and how you seemed to have put a lot of thought into it, incorporating some of my (and almost everyone else's) favourite intangible things and it's cute/ funny/ awesome how it can be read in different ways. :)

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  8. This would make a neat postcard poem

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    1. You reckon? Maybe I'll try submitting it to some postcard company. Thank you, Barbara.

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  9. You bravely went for the triptych, and succeeded beautifully, too! Very impressive.

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    1. Thank you, this little triptych gave me a bit of a hard time :-)

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  10. Awesome poem, Sasha ... and you've won my, "Name That Book" contest, congratulations! Please see my blog post for instructions on your prize .... :)

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    1. Julie, thank you very much! This is so exciting! :-)

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  11. So very cool! You made it look easy. Like many of the other commenters I want to try this now!

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    1. I enjoyed this, it was a bit like putting together a puzzle. It was good for my "little gray cells" to quote my beloved Poirot :-)
      Thank you for your comment!

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