An attempt at a “triptych poem ”
(may be read from left to right and from top to
bottom.)
Faith
Hope Love
Pray
For You
Find
Happiness
Always
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Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
find happiness always...
ReplyDeletewith faith hope & love
its a bit easier.
smiles.
never tried one of these.
might need to.
Thank you for visiting, Brian :-)
DeleteGreat message in compact form :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSomehow, in my attempts to study poetry, I haven't come across this form before. (Or perhaps I did, and then forgot -_- *hangs head*) Thanks for the introduction! I'll have to give it a go, seems like there's lots of room for creative play. I liked your take on the form; very uplifting, kudos :D
ReplyDeleteFred mentioned triptych poems and I looked them up :-)
DeleteIt's a fun form to try.
Thank you for visiting!
...never heard of a triptych poem but def like the effect & versatility... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kelvin :-)
Deletenice, and the way you put this together here, you actually have six triptych's, very cool how that worked out. Thanks for putting this together for us. Definitely enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Fred.
Deletenice..love how this can be read in different ways.. hope for happiness and loving the other...nice..
ReplyDeleteThank you, Claudia :-)
DeleteI love this and how you seemed to have put a lot of thought into it, incorporating some of my (and almost everyone else's) favourite intangible things and it's cute/ funny/ awesome how it can be read in different ways. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteTruly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary!
DeleteThis would make a neat postcard poem
ReplyDeleteYou reckon? Maybe I'll try submitting it to some postcard company. Thank you, Barbara.
DeleteYou bravely went for the triptych, and succeeded beautifully, too! Very impressive.
ReplyDeleteThank you, this little triptych gave me a bit of a hard time :-)
DeleteAwesome poem, Sasha ... and you've won my, "Name That Book" contest, congratulations! Please see my blog post for instructions on your prize .... :)
ReplyDeleteJulie, thank you very much! This is so exciting! :-)
DeleteSo very cool! You made it look easy. Like many of the other commenters I want to try this now!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this, it was a bit like putting together a puzzle. It was good for my "little gray cells" to quote my beloved Poirot :-)
DeleteThank you for your comment!