Sunday, January 22, 2012

'Colour Of Hope'

'Colour my world' - a new prompt from Poetic Bloomings.


Cracking and breaking,
Overflowing with worry, the
Lukewarm sky came crushing
On
Us.  That’s when we saw it – the
Red tail 

Of an autumn squirrel,
Firing through the park, playing

Hide-and-seek,
Oh, there it was again!
Peeking from behind a bush…
Everything was going to be fine.




Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur


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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2012 at 2:14 PM

    Во - про белочку тоже круто. Даже без учёта этих тонкостей с первыми буквами - просто хороший стих.

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  2. margoFebruary 7, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    Well, you are right: the poem has all the elements :-) You capture the squirrel's movement well.

    m

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  3. MiskMaskFebruary 7, 2012 at 3:15 PM

    Great fun this one, and I enjoyed reading it! :)

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  4. vivinfranceFebruary 8, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    Brilliant accrostic - they are so difficult to do.

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