A
response to a visual writing prompt from Margo Roby (Wordgathering.)
Ivan Shishkin Forest Reserve. Pine Grove. 1881
~Pine
Grove~
I’ve
been to this painting,
I
know its every stick,
And
stump, every needle,
The
artist has put so
Painstakingly
in just
The
right places.
I
used to be bothered
By
its sheer realism,
I
could not see behind
Almost
a photograph,
A
pine grove, that was just
That:
a pine grove.
Now
I’m older, kinder,
Less
complicated,
I
travel this painting,
I
sail its seven seas
Of
wooded land, with pines –
As
masts – upright.
I
think of ancient Greece,
The
cold hearted gods,
The
Parthenon, the war
Mongering
Athena,
The
marble stalks that shoot,
And
reach the sky.
I
see a flock of girls,
Slender
and tall, in their
Sarafans,
hair braided,
Stepping
out of the dark,
Getting
ready to dance,
Waiting
for me.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
Love the thought of "pines as masts." Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, so nice to see you here again! :-)
DeleteYES! It worked, didn't it? I love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Margo! I kind of like it, too :-)
DeleteI'm so glad the blogger 'allowed' you to leave a comment, nice to see you here!
Your trees were masts...mine sea kelp! Word play is soooo much fun.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting! Now I'm off to read yours, so curious about the 'sea kelp'!
ReplyDeleteSasha, I love the fourth stanza. Very nicely done piece.
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Thank you, Pamela! I did feel that the painting and I 'clicked' this time. :-)
DeleteThis is marvelous!oh so rich with great lines...'sheer realism' for sure...I want to walk into that painting and be swallowed up in the shadows for a little while!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Janet. I would just love to step inside that forest now...
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