The Sunday Whirl:
Inspired by my kids' plunge into summer.
"Sail on, Silvergirl" (and ~boy.)
~ Sailing ~
I watch them sail –
Two vessels, masts upright –
The seven seas of summer
(Mud-stained sails)
Time crawls for them
Mine – skips, and lands, and sinks
Before I get to count –
A thrown stone
I close my eyes
And travel back once more
I brush away the shadows
Willows cry
I board my ship –
Without a single nail
Of love, and faith, and hope
It’s built to last
And soon enough
I leave the coastal bluffs
And taste the salty breath
Of summertime
I feel my heart
Still trembling in the wind
(Corona’s
way too weak)
I feel alive.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
All these poems with oceans in them keep popping into my reading ventures. I must get to the ocean....you are feeding my desire. Thank you. I especially love:
ReplyDelete"I leave the coastal bluffs
And taste the salty breath
Of summertime"
Thank you, Brenda. I guess longing for salt water is subconscious: ocean themes popping into my head all the time..
ReplyDeleteyes, it does have that strong 'call of the sea' feel to it. A bit of beach time does sound appealing.
ReplyDeleteIt sure does..
DeleteThanks for visiting, Mark.
Sailing away into summertime - ah, what a wonderful idea. The sense of escape is strong in this one. Well written. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Traci :-)
DeleteI'm a sucker for sailing, Sasha. And you brought out the alliteration in me. Nicely penned, my friend!
ReplyDeleteWow! Wonderful words, Walt! (I guess alliteration works both ways :-) Thank you very much for visiting!
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem....love the image of the sailboat....well-done
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joanne!
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