It’s summer still. Fall
Will lower the bridge over
Her castle’s moat. Wait.
Color in her cheeks,
She’ll let you in her castle,
When golden leaves fall.
When loneliness rings,
She’ll wrap you in reds and golds,
Hand you a scepter.
She’ll make you her king,
You’ll be her Sun and her Moon,
She will bow to you.
You’ll call her Autumn,
You will be kind and patient,
You won’t offend her.
You will rule the stars,
You will ride the Milky Way,
Curb a wild comet.
You will know your moves,
Your mind will be clear, agile,
You will shed your doubts.
The passage of clouds,
The low whisper of twilight
Will render your thoughts.
She’ll stay by your side,
Nature’s daughter, your true love,
No gloss on her lips.
She’ll call you her own,
Honey is too sweet for her,
A hint of pepper.
You’ll read her music,
Scriptures earthly and divine,
Complex and easy.
You will dance to it,
She will surrender to you,
Her hair – strands of rain.
To be continued...
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/p/the-september-heights.html
To be continued...
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/p/the-september-heights.html
I like the rain haiku - it stands alone too.
ReplyDeleteLovely verse -#12 is!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Barbara! Can you believe it's already #12? It's going too fast..
Delete"her hair strands of rain" - very pretty image.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteNice flow! And I too like "her hair stands of rain"
ReplyDeleteThank you, Judith.
DeleteI agree with the others before me - the final line is superb! Keep the series going :-)
ReplyDeleteThere is no turning back now - have to keep adding haiku :-)
DeleteNicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteStrands of hair...
ReplyDeletehttp://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html
I'll be over to read yours..
DeleteHair as strands of rain is a magical image!
ReplyDeleteSeven Rains
Thank you!
Deletea Haiku poem, each stanza is a haiku, how creative.
ReplyDeletemissed you a lot at poets rally.
check it out today.
Hi, thank you for your comment. I'm behind on so many things..one of these days I'll get "organizized" :-)
DeleteCool poem, it had wonderful imagery and great energy. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Half way through the poem, stay tuned :-)
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