"Remember"
My land in flames,
The
enemy’s enormous,
A
giant spider spins its fylfot web
Of
death, and suffering, and slavery.
My
people: men, women, children
Turning
overnight into the old time warriors.
Their
armor – unbroken spirit, and unshaken faith
In
triumph of goodness over dark and evil.
Forefathers’
blessing is bestowed on them,
Fills
them with grace as they go out to battle
For
what is right. The struggle’s long and
fierce,
But
ends in splendor, when the rugged banners
Of
what once was an undefeated army
Are
thrown in heaps onto the cobble stones
Of
my own city. For there is no force
That
cows my land, my people into slaving.
The
past not so remote, but forgetful
Man
tends to be, so let us not forget.
May
our minds turn into marble stelas
With
names imprinted on them, names of millions.
Let’s
read them all, all spelled in golden letters,
And
bow our heads in silence,
And
remember.
© Alexandra A. Palmer
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This is a very powerful story in verse. You did a great job with the prompt-words.
ReplyDeleteBest, MK
Thank you, Mariya.
DeleteClever, clever use of 'cows'. I really like the final stanza and the plea it holds.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Margo.
DeleteI would never have thought to use cows in that way. Very good. Strong poem, too.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Misky.
Deletei love the call to become memorials...reading the names...there is strength in that....and the unbreakable spirit....like much...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian.
DeleteAha - another poet who used cows similarly to the way I did ... only other one I've found (that poem's on The Poet Treehouse; I can't remember if you got there or not ...) This is a supper poem by the way and you've wordled well and done a beautiful job of memorialising today ...
ReplyDeleteMy poem for today is an older one but one I'm still partial to - it's here:
http://nsaynne.wordpress.com/2012/09/12/like-pieces-of-confetti-souls-rained-down/
Will head over to the Treehouse, and then to the other link.
DeleteThank you for visiting me, Sharon.
Epic story with the march of war and it's legacy made clear
ReplyDeleteYes, for sure tragedies MUST be remembered. They should not ever be forgotten. And yes, I'm all for those moments of silence as well as the reading of names!
ReplyDeleteJohn, Mary - thank you.
ReplyDeleteSuch a great story...
ReplyDeleteswirl it round and round