I'm very grateful to Poetic Bloomings for leading me to a blog I'm going to visit regularly from now on. The following is a response to a photo prompt from Flashy Fiction:
‘The
Boy and the Old Man’
They
used to watch the Sun together. The Boy
and the Old Man. The Boy was an early
riser. He would hop out of bed, and
tiptoe through the house not to wake up the others. Panting, one by one he would carry big heavy phone
books, and pile them up on top of a flimsy desk below the basement window. He would build a tower until it was just tall
enough for him to reach the latch. Then
he would begin his journey up. Slowly
and carefully…first to the top of the desk… then, holding his breath, and
balancing, even higher up…until both his little feet were planted firmly on the
very top of the tower.
The
Boy would unlock the window, and stick his head right onto the street. Funny, how after all that climbing he would
still be on the ground! Then he would
turn his head to the left, and sure enough, he would be there, limping towards
him. The Old Man. The Boy would wave, and the Old Man would
wave back. He would come, and sit down
heavily on the pavement next to the Boy’s window. He would lean against the wall, resting. He was old, the Old Man. And tired.
But his eyes were young still.
They would talk about things, the Boy and the Old Man. The Boy would bring his worries to him, and
the Old Man would take them in his withered wrinkled hands, and turn them into
dust. And then he would tell the Boy of
the wonderful distant lands, where men were strong, and women were all kind and
beautiful. He was full of stories, the
Old Man. And all of them were true.
And
then it would happen. Even in the city,
deprived of the sky, and cramped, they knew it was coming. Everything around them would transform as if
touched by a magic wand. Everything
would be given a new life, a chance of a new beginning. Dazzling and glorious, the big flaming star would
rise above the tile roofs like a promise of happiness. And the Old Man would look at the Boy, and
wink. And then he would leave, saying, “If
you don’t see me one day, don’t look for me, look at the Sun, for he’ll always
be there.”
And
one day the Old Man did not come. And
the day after… The Boy kept looking for him. He forgot all about the Sun. Day after day he waited, hoping with all his
big little heart to see the Old Man again.
But the Old Man never came. The
Boy’s heart became heavy with worries, and his eyes grew old with sadness. But then he remembered what the Old Man
said. In the hour when the world renewed
itself once more, the Boy looked up.
Sure enough, the Sun climbed atop the sky. It beamed right at him, warming his heart,
and melting his worries. It filled his
eyes with dancing sparkles of laughter.
Still grinning, the Boy began to climb down, but something made him
stop. He looked up one last time, and the star
– so distant and wonderful, so strong, beautiful, and kind – looked back at him,
and winked.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
I had given you your propers at Flashy Fiction, but this story deserves to be touted one your own turf. I had found Flashy Fiction at the mention by RJ Clarken, one of the "promptesses". It has fallen to a point where the ladies stop prompting. But I think there is something special about FF and am trying to urge the ladies to continue. We have a great group at Poetic Bloomings, and I knew we could drum up some interest. Hopefully, RJ can get the rest of the girls to get it running again. We'll see what we can do to help. Thanks for your contribution.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Walt. This is actually very 'my thing', I love writing short essays, or something that I guess may fall into the Flashy Fiction category. I'll definitely be checking the prompts.
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