A response to a writing prompt #90 from We Write Poems: Keepsakes like a breath.
I did not write about a keepsake, but I believe I followed the prompt, for my poem is about a material thing that triggered memories, and emotions.
‘Fight’
The
fight went spinning,
Hurling
angry stones,
Releasing
spiky
Poisonous
arrows
Of
words that linger.
Air
thick with hatred,
You
left, door slamming.
Gasping
for some breath,
I
paced up and down,
Like
a wild beast, caged.
That’s
when I saw them,
There,
by the doorway,
Worn
out, and battered,
Kicked
away in haste,
Well
loved, and lonely.
Something
stirred in me,
I
bent, picked them up,
Pressed
them to my heart.
Hugging
your slippers,
Prayed
for your return.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
Poignant and sweet ending . . . the calm after the storm.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Nan!
DeleteAhhh, the things tossed aside that are penned to our deepest emotions. I think that true affection always finds forgiveness in the personal objects. Well done!
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Donald
Thank you for your comment, Donald!
DeleteSweet slippers!
ReplyDelete:-) !
DeleteI love how this circles from the swinging anger back to the heart. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen!
Deleteit touched me..
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I'm so glad.. I loved your poem, and the prompt it gave birth to. Thank you very much!
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