Wednesday's prompt from Poetic Asides: write about a life changing experience.
I
would have said ‘it was the day I saw you,’
I’d
rather not: the phrase is beat and common,
And
it was not that bold ‘first sight’ sensation
That
comes in movies, rarely in life,
But
that’s the day when filled with quiet wonder,
And
unaware still of what was coming,
I
caught a glimpse of life that lay before me
For
me to take, without looking back.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
I love the ending!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mama Zen! I do, too :-)
DeleteI love this!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Laurie :-)
DeleteThis is kind of how I felt when I met my wife. You captured it wonderfully. Great job. Moskowitz
ReplyDeleteOh Buddah, thank you.
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