A prompt from Carry on Tuesday # 149
This week I've taken the first few words of Robert Louis Stevenson's sweet poem My Shadow as our inspiration
I have a little shadow
~
Parting ~
A
distant star, a song,
And
morning dew -
That’s
how little
I
have left of you.
A
weeping shadow of
A
willow tree -
That’s
how little
I
have left of me.
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
Image credit:
http://soulscent.blogspot.com/2011/12/willow-tree.html
Oh, the nostalgia and tender-sweet pain! Love it.Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Janet, you're so nice!
Deleteso delicately sad
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Thanks!
DeleteIt is so tender, sad and sweet at the same time. And you have made this wonderful play with the last lines of your two stanzas.
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Thank you for such a kind comment, Mariya.
DeleteWhat a sad and heartfelt poem. A beautifully written piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your words, Keith.
DeleteA soul toucher. Good and concise. Good poems have to have willow trees.
ReplyDeleteYour comment about the willow trees made me smile! Something about those trees, hard to resist them...
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Poignant and emotively written, gorgeous, Happy Sasha. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hannah, smiles to you!
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