Poetic
Bloomings is hosting a series of “memoir” prompts. The latest one encourages us to write about our
childhood home, not the people (“Not yet,” Marie and Walt say), but the place.
“Numbers”
“What
are the neighbors of five?”
A
teacher asked a six-year old me.
“There’s
one girl across the hall…”
She
laughed – it was about numbers,
She
was expecting “four” and “six”,
But
to me five meant family – us,
Two
parents, one grandma, one sister,
One
little me.
There
were other numbers, too:
Fifty
square meters (not quite),
Three
rooms, one tiny kitchen,
Fifth
floor, four windows
All
facing one busy city street
Lined
up with hundreds of trees,
Countless
buses, “buses with horns,”*
And
all sorts of cars swishing by
(I
used to watch them for hours
Counting
red cars.
Always
red.)
Numbers
changed as years went by,
But
always growing, never decreasing,
“Four
generations under one roof,
Six
people…and one dog!”
My
mother would proudly say
At
one point.
The
count is different as of today.
Not
because of my babushka’s passing,
Or
me living across the ocean for years,
But
because of my two kids’ decision
To
take their first steps in the narrow hallway
Of
their mother’s childhood home.
Numbers
do change – they grow,
For
whoever has been touched by that place
Never
leaves.
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*"buses with horns" - trolleybuses
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*"buses with horns" - trolleybuses
Live
for the Love of it,
The
Happy Amateur
What a charming poem!
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