It’s summer still. Fall
Will lower the bridge over
Her castle’s moat. Wait.
Color in her cheeks,
She’ll let you in her castle,
When golden leaves fall.
When loneliness rings,
She’ll wrap you in reds and golds,
Hand you a scepter.
To be continued...
To be continued...
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
I liked the idea of merging different topic in one continued set.
ReplyDeleteI liked the second haiku and its temporariness =)
I like the way you are making this little drama unfold!
ReplyDeleteLoneliness of Stars
Thank you, Paper heart, Mark :-)
ReplyDeleteI like the haiku set...specially the last one, when loneliness rings ~
ReplyDeleteThank you, Grace, glad you like it.
DeleteI like the way these three haiku link to each other and cascade the ideas, ending up with the last one, which is quite warm and friendly !
ReplyDeleteThank you, I hope to keep linking them :-)
DeleteI am enjoying your haiku story. Today's first line was special to me "when loneliness rings"
ReplyDeleteThank you :-) I've been enjoying writing it.
DeleteThis is a clever fairytale slant on loneliness - ie it is inevitably temporary here, whereas in real life it is often a permanent state!
ReplyDeleteI feel that there are moments in life when loneliness subsides, tricks us into believing that we're not lonely. But it never leaves, always returns, stronger than before...
DeleteNot a very optimistic view, I'm afraid. But I do think that people are lonely.
Beautiful haiku story weaved here...Enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteLonely girl
Well crafted haiku - like how you are weaving the daily challenges together.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I'm enjoying telling a tale through haiku.
DeleteI can't wait to see what that scepter does!
ReplyDeleteA Long Loneliness
:-) I'm curious, too.
DeleteA unique feel to this. Lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
DeleteAnd the story continues ... nicely done.
ReplyDeletecolours in her cheek.. lovely set!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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