It’s summer still. Fall
Will lower the bridge over
Her castle’s moat. Wait.
Color in her cheeks,
She’ll let you in her castle,
When golden leaves fall.
When loneliness rings,
She’ll wrap you in reds and golds,
Hand you a scepter.
She’ll make you her king,
You’ll be her Sun and her Moon,
She will bow to you.
To be continued...
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
woah please her she will please you.. great deal!
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure it was intended to be that steamy, but I can live with that :-)
DeleteYou are indeed creating lovley haiku for her..thanks...
ReplyDeleteRS:)
It just gets better everyday!
ReplyDeleteI'm SO glad :-) I'll try to keep the momentum going.
DeleteI'm getting the idea now - good luck for the rest of the month!
ReplyDeleteThank you, a long way to go still :-)
DeleteReally liking this, afraid I will fall in and out of humor :)
ReplyDeleteIt's all very serious... :-)
DeleteAwesome! You're story is unfolding ... very well done.
ReplyDeleteHooray! :-)
Delete"You’ll be her Sun and her Moon" I like that. Things are happening here :-)
ReplyDeleteI love the personification of fall. There are some beautiful images here.
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteLovely weaving of images in your haiku as the story unfolds ... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment!
Deleteah ! the story you are creating .. interesting :)
ReplyDeleteAn unfolding story -- quite a challenge you've set for yourself. Look forward to the next "chapter"!
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Choreographing Stars
Nimue, Becca - thank you for the encouragement :-)
ReplyDeleteIt gets better and more suspenseful. Great!
ReplyDeleteGood! I'm glad :-)
DeleteA story in haiku.. interesting :) Like it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Leo.
DeleteYou are unfolding this story so well!
ReplyDeletePursuing the Moon
Thank you!
DeleteOh, I see how it goes! It's magnificent. Will make sure I don't miss any other! Great project :-)
ReplyDeleteBest, M.
Thank you, Mariya, so nice to see you here :-)
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