It’s summer still. Fall
Will lower the bridge over
Her castle’s moat. Wait.
Color in her cheeks,
She’ll let you in her castle,
When golden leaves fall.
When loneliness rings,
She’ll wrap you in reds and golds,
Hand you a scepter.
She’ll make you her king,
You’ll be her Sun and her Moon,
She will bow to you.
You’ll call her Autumn,
You will be kind and patient,
You won’t offend her.
You will rule the stars,
You will ride the Milky Way,
Curb a wild comet.
You will know your moves,
Your mind will be clear, agile,
You will shed your doubts.
The passage of clouds,
The low whisper of twilight
Will render your thoughts.
To be continued...
Live for the Love of it,
The Happy Amateur
Lovely images today.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Barbara.
DeleteNice. Much better than mere pencil!
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree, what a lovely image you have painted for us today.
ReplyDeleteSusan, Ellecee - thank you!
ReplyDeleteVery pretty. This whole set of haiku just gets better and better. I love it.
ReplyDeleteI'm so very glad :-)
DeleteVery nicely written
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletevery impressed with your use of many prompts in one cohesive and thoughtful piece....
ReplyDeleteJoanne, thank you :-)
DeleteWhoa! I'm blown away by your amazingly creative mind
ReplyDeleteYou've made me blush..thank you for your comment :-)
DeleteThank you, Mama Zen!
ReplyDeleteAnd the story unfolds ... nice haiku for today's prompt Render
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DeleteVery truee...
ReplyDeletehttp://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/beloved-parents.html
Thank you, Locomente.
DeleteThe low whisper of twilight... I can hear a gentle sound.. serene
ReplyDeletehttp://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/render-haiku.html
nicely connected!
ReplyDeleteI am simply amazed to see how beautifully and effortlessly you've embellished this post with all the prompts till now.
ReplyDeleteGood job. :-)
Oh..thank you :-)
DeleteI haven't been here for a few days, and I like the way this story is unfolding. Brilliant idea for September Heights!
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:-) !
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